Chapter One Redux

After some careful thought, we realize that the first chapter of our comic is really, really old, and doesn't reflect the current story or characters of Watcher's War. Erin and I began WW almost three years ago, and a whole bunch has changed in that time, we want to make sure that the story stays consistent.
Some things that will be changed from the original chapter:

We have completely redone Karen's physical features, you could say she very well rounded (har har).

We've added more characters and plot (oooh plot) to the first chapter in hopes to keep your attention.

And very importantly; more character development, we now think you'll have a better idea of who the characters are from the get go.

Good times.

The comic will most likely be released in May, like this May. So stayed tuned for more updates, and information.

This is only a test...

The sole purpose of this blog it to show of Watcher's War and get feed back from people.
This is the first chapter of Watcher's War the rest will be posted at some point over the summer.
The artist and I would really appreciate feed back.
Does the story make sense so far?
Can you tell who's talking and when?
Is the text legible and easy to read?
Any other questions or comments?
Thank you so much!