This is only a test...

The sole purpose of this blog it to show of Watcher's War and get feed back from people.
This is the first chapter of Watcher's War the rest will be posted at some point over the summer.
The artist and I would really appreciate feed back.
Does the story make sense so far?
Can you tell who's talking and when?
Is the text legible and easy to read?
Any other questions or comments?
Thank you so much!